I have never considered myself to be a great grammarian or speller -
and I have ample proof that this is not simple modesty on my part.
However, I have worked on both and, in particular, have come to pay very
close attention to them in delivering a course on Elements of Clear
Writing for UNB in Bathurst, as part of that institution's School of
Nursing program. I have been puzzled frequently of late, then, when I have
come across a particular construction, one that is showing up with
increasing regularity in even supposedly good newspapers and magazines.
This is my own example of the construction. "I recently bought a new
car. Which was a very important decision for me." Starting a new sentence
in this way - with "which" - has always seemed wrong to me, because such a
sentence is incomplete and therefore faulty. However, as I said above, I
am seeing this construction increasingly often, in newspapers such as The
Telegraph-Journal, The Globe and Mail, and, even (if it can be imagined)
in The Tribune (albeit in a guest column). As well, it crops up in all
sorts of magazines and other forms of writing that have at least some
pretence to good writing.
I was preparing a class for my course the other evening when I came
across yet another example of the construction. I decided, then and there,
to resolve this for myself. Was it, in fact, a grammatical error, or had I
missed something somewhere along the way? It turns out that it is an
error, one that seems to be caused by an on-going confusion over usage of
two words in our language: "which" and "that". "That" is a very strong
little word in English; it is used in a number of ways, including that of
a demonstrative pronoun. There are only two such pronouns in the language
- "that", and "this". However many people want to use "which" in the same
way - and that is where the error occurs. To go back to my example above,
it would be correct to write "That was a very important decision for me."
"This was a very important decision for me" is also correct, but "Which
..." isn't.
Does it really matter? Well, yes, I think that it does. The language
that we speak and write is still the most important means of communication
that we have. The more we compromise the language, the less effectively we
communicate. At some point, we begin to become obscure in our meanings to
the point where no one is really certain about what we are trying to say -
and that can only lead to intellectual chaos. Far too often, I try to read
letters of editors, columns in magazines and newspapers, and even feature
articles, only to give up because the organization of thought, and the
structure of the language used, is so poor that I cannot be certain about
what is being said.
We can blame the education system, the overuse of computers, or dark
phases of the moon if we like, but the central fact of the matter is that
if even supposedly good writers, working for supposedly good journals,
become increasingly sloppy, we take the chance of losing the ability to
communicate altogether.